Sunday, March 21, 2010

Very Short Story 13

“Thank you for the best sex I’ve ever had”, he whispered as he put his clothes back on. And then he calmly proceeded to put her back into the body bag from whence he had retrieved her from.

2 comments:

  1. Are you going to piece all your short stories together to form a novel? Good job on the short stories which are captivating and are a much easier read...

    She let loose an uncontrollable scream as he thrust his 'weapon' forward. Her stint as the only female fencing coach was reaching a premature end.

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  2. haha! Well i'll definitely include your short story into the novel if i ever do.

    feel free to leave your short stories on my FB account Really Short Stories if you ever feel another ... urge, and want it to be publicly read.

    Thanks for the comment!

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